Another one bites the bait

KLiC 015 told me:

Okay let's get one thing straight, that fan fic you just flamed was only one of my first and laziest, as I call them, assignments. Plus I'm already trying to find my own style in writting. It has been my dream to become an author for a long time, did it even occur to you why I write fan fics? Fan fics are only my practice area. Plus Destroyed and Reborn is not MY original work, my other friends messed with it too, we did it for kicks. I don't write much action or comedy, I do drama, angst, those type of stories. I have other fan fics if you didn't notice. I admit, I'm an amateur now. I can't write like my idols, or maybe I never will. But you see, I write because I enjoy doing it. Not because of the fans. It's my life, the only thing I find peace in. I can see what people say about my stories and eventually create my own original style that everyone can enjoy. I write fan fics because I want to practice for the big time. It's hard enough to keep my place in the top ten of the
class and practice my writting skills at the same time. Just stop reading this fan fic, even I hated what my friends and I made. I wanted to make it my own original work with only one OC, but they butted in and ruined it. I thought, it was only a fan fic what the heck. Don't say I suck, because eventually, people will say that your work sucks too. Being flamed now, for me, is part of the job. So don't think I'll stop writting because you told me to. I will never give up my dream because someone said I suck when they should try and see what their calling someone who has feelings. Remember this, I am young and determined to become a great author one day. I write stories to make people happy, if doesn't anymore then I'll just change it. I admit I was really bitchy to everyone who flamed me, well most of it came from my friends, but I realized it's part of the task of an author. I will accet these as challenges on my road of one day becoming a world-renowned author and lift the
name of my country with my writting. I can write good stories, I know I can. That's why I want to imporve more and more each day. My message to you, calling people a moron is so juvenille.

I say:

Laziest? So what? Is that an excuse to suck? Besides, little girl, 'Elite Love' is no better. It's the same mistake-ridden cliché that you can't edit because you don't have enough intelligence to do so.

And you're not the only one who worked on it? Why, is that all your meager, combined IQ could manage? How many of you wrote that crap? 3? God forbid he meets people dumber than you. Then again, that can't be possible.


It's not your original work. Mmmh, I dread to think what your original work would look like. Spare me in that case.


You write because you enjoy doing it? Let's see, do you also enjoy calling reviewers/critics/flamers dumbasses? Look at the way you write, if that can't be called a work of an utter dumbass then I wouldn't know what to call you. Maybe worse-than-dumbass would suit you. If you don't write for the fans/readers then why the hell do you have to beg them for reviews? A decent and smart writer would know better than to act like she's whoring her shitty fics.


Who in the world ever told you that writing would improve your style? It won't. You know why? Because there is no external source of inspiration. In that manner you only entertain your own style, you don't get inspiration, and you're stuck with your frighfully amateurish qualities. If you want to improve your writing, then go read some good books.

Why shouldn't I say that you suck? Are you asking me to lie just to give you a nice rep? Face it, you suck huge time.


'Being flamed now, for me, is part of the job.' Really? From what I see, you can't accept criticisms. You just tell your critics to shut the hell up and stop reading. In case you didn't know, critiques are also a way to improve your miserable writing ability, or lack thereof. Can't stomach them? Why don't you stop uploading your fics then?


'So don't think I'll stop writting because you told me to. I will never give up my dream because someone said I suck when they should try and see what their calling someone who has feelings.' HAHAHAHAHA! This quite moved me to tears. No, I won't stop until you turn your stinking attitude around. You're hopeless as anyone could get.


'Remember this, I am young and determined to become a great author one day.' Great author? But you are way behind. You watch crap, you read crap from Dan Brown who doesn't know how to write creatively, you read Baby-Sitter Club Book Series, Nancy Drew Books, Narnia, A Series of Unfortunate Events when you're old enough to have your menstrual period and you definitely can't learn anything from those. I started reading Stephen King when I was 14 fucking years old, I'm 18 now and I don't think I could remotely become a decent author someday. What more if I were like you?


'I write stories to make people happy, if doesn't anymore then I'll just change it.' I thought you don't write for fans? Are you contradicting yourself? It wasn't a paragraph ago when you just said you don't write for anyone else but for your progress. You need psychological assistance, bad.


Here's the deal; unless you learn how to spell 'writing' and 'juvenile' correctly, you won't be able to know how to begin writing a mediocre story.

I still think you're a moron, nothing more.