Look who crawled out of the abyss...
Kampasi wrote on my review box for the story For What It Takes:
It's... it's a guy...? o__o
After all this time, I always thought this person was a girl. A real bitch, who flamed my younger self for fun... Really, I was angry with everything SHE stood for on this website... Flames are fine, but you don't have to be unusually cruel.
And it turns out to be a guy. Call me sexist, but now I don't really care. XD Yeah, she/he flamed the hell out of my old account. I'm resubmitting the same story, but editted because of that. So something good came out of it. However, that doesn't make up for how awful I used to feel.
I still think she/he is a bitch. I'm glad they're gone. =D And if they're not, then they'll be zipping over to my fic soon to flame it. The editted version. Ha.
Hell, I'm a bit out of whack today. It's still too early and I'm wondering what I'm doing up but I do remember her as the one who misquoted that Klingon proverb "Revenge is a dish best served cold." Instead of saying it like it is, she had to make it hers by saying, "Revenge will never be a dish best served cold."
It is too early to focus on being called a bitch. I'm so awful, terrible, insufferable - and I'm shooting for Satan's throne.
Well yeah, I'm a guy and I screw girls from time to time. Nothing special really. I'm trying to make a string of broken hearts. Hahahahaha!
If you can believe that.
posted by betyoulovethat at 7:52 PM
12 Comments:
So what does it matter if Bet were a guy? :D I think he rocks, and he rocks hard, everything else be damned.
2:20 AM
Where did that came from? Isn't that a little late?
And who cares about genders?
12:23 PM
Haha. I got into your blog. o__o; I find that oddly amusing. Then again, you made a special little account just for me. "Wild Oscar", was it? Why should I be surprised that another blog entry has been so graciously dedicated to me?
Yeah, sure, your fanfictions are funny. You have people who absolutely worship you for writing them. XD And I have to thank you for editting some of my chapters; it comes in handy. But, whatever. Are you still in highschool, or are you in college now? Are you still spending your time attacking younger writers? It's your time to waste, but don't think it will stop anybody from writing. That, my friend, would be truly pathetic.
So you are a guy. Still think you're the Queen of England?
12:31 PM
Well, Kampasi, little lady.
I doubt that 'Wild Oscar' was Bet You Love That, but you are free to think so, if you must.
I see that you have been burned. but there's no use to just come here and hurl questions. He flames and he does not think he is wasting his time, it's all that matters. He did edit your works and you said yourself it came in handy. And he is a very good writer. He acts King because he is. At least, I think so.
What matters is now, you pick up from where you had left and improve yourself. Don't come here to set up yourself to be burned again. Chances are to be risked if it worths it, in this case, it does not seem so, this weak attempt at another war is just not worth it. Here's an advice, phoenixes are capable of rebirth--so think.
2:23 AM
To be serious, Mike, he did make an account just for me. =D I know because he would continue little conversations with me using both accounts. And he would post editted versions of my chapters using both accounts. Handy but annoying. o__o
If it pleases you, then call him a King. If he wants to flame people then it's his time, not mine. I'm not setting myself up to be flamed (yet, thinking about it now, maybe I am), I'm setting myself up to be reviewed. Because as soon as he devoted so much of his time to editting my chapters I became absolutely obsessed with proving him wrong.
But he was right. It's funny how when you go back and read something, after you've let it alone for a long time, sometimes you find that it's not as good as you originally thought. My fanfiction was badly written, but the base plotline was still pretty good. All I really want from Bet is a review, for old time's sake. It can be a flame or it can be something along the lines of "You've improved.". All I want from him is admittance that I've improved. I don't want him to say, "Dude, you rock! I'm so sorry I ever flamed you! =D" because that would be... Well, the chance of that happening is a snowball's chance in hell.
8:20 PM
No, believe me. I know Wild Oscar was not Bet You Love That. But probably he is a friend of Bet.
I have to tell you, that I opposed his ideals when he first started his flaming crusade. That was in the Slam Dunk category, and I was pretty green to the site, and I was being blatant that I disagreed with his approach. I even challenged him to write fictions, to validate how good he really was, and he did write a few parodies. However, I found that I was completely smitten with his style, and I was the only one he did not hold grudge against for ‘attacking’ him. Truthfully, I wanted to see how good he really was, and he was really good; he was my king ever since.
Honestly, I don’t think he flames for sheer fun. Rather, it is because he wants to remind a few authors how terribly they write, and he does read much good literature. You bet that he has a vast knowledge on writing—from the way he flames, the way he writes; I can conclude he is indeed a very good writer. But the case in FFN is, bad writers are arrogant and refuse to follow his advice. He had tried being nice but it did not work for them. He was being rude, and you were determined to prove him wrong. Strong stimulant results strong feedback, so there is still something good that comes out of all this.
Knowing him, I know that Bet isn’t who many think he is. If you are sure yourself that you have improved, hell does not have to freeze over, I am sure that Bet will be kind enough to review you one day. It is possible to get a review from Bet, but you have to make sure that:-
1)You are not writing OC
2)You are not writing Mary Sue
3)You have interesting plotline
4)You have artistic/beautiful sentences structure
5)You’re not arrogant
It would be my wishful thinking to think that I have placated you, but I hope at least that has taken a little off your back. Good luck.
10:50 PM
I think it was his knowledge on writing that got to me when I used to read his flames. Looking at the reviews now, I think my main problem was this "Wild Oscar" character, who may or may not even BE Bet. However, if Bet did make that account just to flame me then I need some closure from him.
If he knows who this "Wild Oscar" person is, I'd be very happy if one of you could point me in their general direction.
5:45 PM
why do writers today keep on making excuses about being younger than the flamer? say, you're in highschool, that's not enough reason to suck. in first year, you have to at least know basic grammar. what excuse do you have for that now? remember, betyoulovethat, wild oscar and the other flamers are also a bunch of teenagers and they write pretty well. and please, stop giving shit like 'that was my first fanfic' i wrote that when i was 13 blah blah'; it's tiring and lame. it doesn't matter if you wrote that while you were stiil in your mom's womb, the fact that you exposed that to public gives you responsibility to accept what people have to say to your work.
ok, some people improve, but not much. i'm actually expecting a huge jump, from the original fic to the edited version so this better be good. otherwise, people will just dismiss your fic again and i myself don't even check out mediocre ones. what the hell.
6:57 PM
kampasi,
Do you honestly think I will make an account just to flame you?
I don't believe you. You can't even pretend to have common sense for once. Shouldn't you be thanking Oscar for pointing out your hideous mistakes? You are a base ingrate. You can't even accept HONEST criticisms.
Listen here, go to Oscar's page. Check how long he's been a member of this site. Then go back to your review page and observe carefully the date on which he flamed you. Can't you see the difference? Or please don't tell me your country doesn't teach children to count.
The problem with you is you are so obsessed with yourself. Oscar has been flaming since time immemorial and he's flamed thousands like you. If you think that Oscar's me and I made that account especially for you, you're totally missing out on a crucial point. Why the hell would I bother to make a new account, pray tell? I can just indulge on my flame galore anytime I want with full identification, can't I? Only losers like you do that.
You just can't accept that besides me, there's someone who thinks that you write like a cow's embryo.
Here's the deal; climb a coconut tree. Get a coconut and eat the it FULL and leave no chunk. By then you may learn that it's a smarter thing to do than accuse me that I'm Oscar.
For fuck's sake we don't even agree on pairings. Shut the fuck up; it will do everyone good.
3:48 AM
YOU ARE ONE BITCHING LIAR. OSCAR AND I REPLY WITH THE SAME THINGS TO YOU? FUCK OFF, BITCH. IF THERE'S SOMEONE WHO PISSES ME OFF LIKE 'KAMPASI WRITING STYLE', IT'S THOSE LOSERS WHO HURL STRAIGHFACED LIES AT ME.
IF I REMEMBER IT CORRECTLY, IT WAS OSCAR WHO DID ALL THE BETA-READING AND WORD-AFTER-WORD MASSACRE ON YOUR CRAP. ALL I EVER DID WAS TO REPLY TO YOUR CRAP AND CRITICIZE YOUR WORK, GENERALLY. I DIDN'T DO SOME FUCKING PAINSTAKING SPECIFICATIONS LIKE OSCAR DID.
NOW, IF YOU'RE STILL GOING TO PRETEND THAT YOU DON'T KNOW HOW TO READ, THERE'S NO WAY GOD WILL ALLOW YOU TO WRITE DECENTLY. LYING BITCH.
3:54 AM
Hm. You can't blame me for thinking it was you all that time. You were the original flamer, and didn't you do one chapter in the same fashion Wild Oscar did? I never really looked into it. And if you haven't noticed, I did redo the fanfic. On a seperate account. Under this name.
So, there you go. You can go flame it. I just want closure. I'm not a lying bitch, I simply misunderstood the situation. And continued to misunderstand it until somebody (you) cleared it up for me. So where is this guy? If he has a blog, point me towards it. Because I want fucking closure.
And I never blamed it completely on my age. I was a lazy sack of crap who was on the site because my friends were. I typed up a good basic plotline and murdered it with spelling mistakes and bad grammar. I killed anything that might have been good about the fic. And then I redid it. A massive improvement. But it will never be perfect. I don't know everything about grammar. So getting on my case about anything a little past basics is just plain shit, because that's how much I know.
I'm not the cocky idiot I used to be.
9:20 PM
What the hell is going here? and why that mean things or says? and how could you say that?
1:15 PM
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