For Shay & Magic Wishing Pebbles' defense of the greatest writer in the whole wide world
To Shay: Isn't it cool that when one says To Shay, it's like saying Touché? What you said was very flattering, unfortunately, I'm 17, arrogant, touchy and immensely immature. Also, it's not actually just the grammar that bothers me. To tell you the truth, it's only a trifle but the things that really tick me off are the inconsistencies in characterizations, lame plots if there are any at all and attitudes that are so insufferable.
They also seem to have a secret organization that helps each other to churn out endless crap. Look at the msg below.
Message:
Magic Pebbles (cloudy supporter) 2004-11-27 2 Anonymous
Okay. This is for Bet you love that.
Cant you give Cloudy-Skies86 a break? I mean not everyone is perfect! I myself make plenty of error when typing and I don't think that it is fair saying all this stuff to her! Okay maybe all her work is not right in every teenie, detail, but there is no need to constantly rave at her! I'm not trying to be nasty to you, but If I had work flamed like this, it would crush me like a cardboard box!
And I also dislike the way in one of your reveiws you said nasty stuff about her instead of the story!!
Actualy I just scaned thorugh all of your reveiws (see I dont do everything perfect either)and I actualy think that this is an ABSOLUTE DISGRACE what you are doing! Can't you stop? I would never flame someone like this! I find it downright rude and distressing!
Also you should not swear in your reveiws. Especialy not at someone. (as I have already stated though not in this temper) FLAME THE STORY (I know you do ) BUT DO NOT FLAME THE AUTHOR!
Better go and do some target practise, eh? Okay my own gob is not very cillvised and clean, but at least I can control it!
Can you actualy feel what this is like for someone? Its so horrible! I think you have actualy made yourself exteamly unpopular on this site! Im sure cloudy is sick of this so LEAVE HER BE! If I was her right now, you would be very sorry indeed...
Look I know this is tedious and unessesary, but I feel it is. Ha.
Looking at your work, I think it is clear that you are not the most amazing person you seem to want people to think you are! You've had flames too I see? Well now do you take at least SOME notice of what you are doing?
All in all, you make me sick.
Sorry about that cloudy, mellon nin. I bet you really wanted this on your story! (sorry!) She's not even going to read this is she? But I don't belive in keeping feelings bottled up. This had to come out eventualy.
Anyway, please ignore this person and continue. I hate too see things like what she did. Anybody who swear and constantly undermines you is not worth two pebbles.
And now the power and rage has now left me. I am at peace again. She is not the best author in the world! WE ARE ALL HERE TO WRITE ABOUT WHAT WE LIKE AND CLOUDY HAS DONE THAT. THIS IS NOT A SITE ' COME HERE TO HAVE YOUR SPIRIT ELIMINATED!'
Anyway I really hope you are not angry for me doing this, but thats what I want to say to her.
Farewell! And may bring you the happiest times yet to come,
Love,
Magic Pebbles. :)
---End of lovely message
I'm sorry MWP, did you want me to flame you? Are you so deprived of attention that you have to attract mine? Think RECIPROCITY. If Cloudy Skies is free to post her ugly crap that makes people gag, why can't I tell her things that should make her gag? I would write an eye for an eye, a tooth for a tooth, but it's not what it really stands for, right anonymous #3?
If you think i'm not the best writer in the world...er, so what? I'm not trying to make you believe that I am. Besides, what you see in my FFN profile is just the tip of the iceberg. I'm not going to brag but I tell you I know what I can do and i'm not in the habit of considering opinions from someone who doesn't have a proper grasp of elementary logic. Besides, you're hiding in anonymity while attacking me. In Britain, they'd call you a cad or a mucker. Now, me. I'm not even going to try to deny that I'm a meanie. How's that?
14 Comments:
what the fuck is that peace-y beatnik shiat?
~ eggsellent
3:40 AM
Good for you. You are immune to criticisms like that. It's a free world anyway.
1:34 PM
yes indeed i love murakami, hard boiled wonderland and the end of the world is one i've read, is that the one that appears to be in two separate halves?
also read a few short stories by him that i got off the internet, can't wait to get "kafka on the shore" which i think will be released in england early next year,
x
2:59 PM
ugh... I just read CLoudy-skies work and I must admit what a dissapointment. I read all the pointers and they were VERY good... umm - how can she be the better person for admitting her head is too filled with air to squeeze in a couple of good pointers (I'd love to receive those pointers - they were really helpful!) I even reviewed her story... do you think she'd hunt me down in all her bitchy-glory? I REALLY hated the switching to songs and script form crap I saw... it just ruined the tragedy er... drama/mystery we have all accustomed to read, love and love to hate. Pls. do me a complete favor Betyoulovedthat! review my fanfic and put HELPFUL comments on it - I don't want to end like her! Noooo!!!!!!! You have good advice and I need good advice - I don't REALLY want to end up like her (and as I reread my old chapters I can FREELY say they sucked ass - bad) uh - flame my work or anything but right now I need help and you obviously won't be too hindered by tact to tell the truth like it is. pls. review 'A bandit's ways' pls! you must be sick of me asking for a comment from you (cause I've done that before) but I know when I need to improve my stuff. help! I'd really TRUTHFULLY appreciate it -mistressKC
9:43 PM
I'm sorry if I'm starting to piss you off - you can just 4get what I said about my last comment if you want to. If you want to be left alone by me that's ok with me. sorry for bothering you again... I'm just feeling... well... weird, me voluntarily asking for flames ('u')... lol... I feel weird honestly - I'd love an honest review from you but NO pressure. this is my last comment here. Adios!^-^ (and tnx - for what reason I'm thanking you I don't really know...)
10:25 PM
I'm sorry if I'm starting to piss you off - you can just 4get what I said about my last comment if you want to. If you want to be left alone by me that's ok with me. sorry for bothering you again... I'm just feeling... well... weird, me voluntarily asking for flames ('u')... lol... I feel weird honestly - I'd love an honest review from you but NO pressure. this is my last comment here. Adios!^-^ (and tnx - for what reason I'm thanking you I don't really know...) - mistressKC
10:25 PM
Hey Mistresskc, it would be intolerable cruelty on God or the devil's part to make someone as horrible as Cloudy-skies86. Anyway, I'm willing to beta without being harsh, whichever you prefer. If you just mail your stuff at betyoulovethat@yahoo.com. My schedule's a bit tight though nowadays but I'll see what I can do.
Nah, I'm not annoyed. You have to be as awful as CL86 to annoy me and believe me, you're still very far off the mark. Besides she's already 18 and she still writes that way!
4:35 AM
Hello there! Its actually Plasmolysed Cell Membrane (don't even ask what it means! I swear if someone asks me to write another bio essay I'll thump him!). Thanks for reviewing my fic though I am quite surprised you read that one since I haven't updated it in aeons. And yes, I know that Faramir and Eowyn will end up together in the end. It isn't a romance fic which is probabaly why it doesn't say that in the genre. Anyway, I was just surfing ffnet (yeah, I'm so free after those dreadful O levels) and came across this blog of yours so I thought I'd just pop by and say thanks for the rather kind review. ~Toodles Noodles~
8:46 AM
i'm glad i'm only writing about murakami, it all seems a bit heated in here.
http://66.194.239.204/~exorcisi/index.htm
is the murakami site, loads of stuff including short stories and stuff on kafka on the shore,
dance, dance, dance has a storyline about a sheep man, which comes up in another - i guess it's a wild sheep chase, i don't know of another novel which also deals with that,
after dark? haven't heard of that one.
x
3:39 PM
I SAY: Bet You Love That, you're pathetic, get a life moron. tsk tsk. You suck! You wrriting sucks! Don't flame my works cos you don't know what you're getting into! You're so pathetic you have this for a living, you're life coach has abandoned you! No one probably gives you attention! What I wrote isn't a Mary-Sue! What the hell is wrong with you? You're so dumb, asshole! I won't stoop down to your level!
CANADIAN TRANSLATION: (Since you mentioned you're canadian, it would probably be easier for you to comprehend this) Hi how are you? I hope you're fine. I'm such a loser I've nothing to say to get back at you so I say you're pathetic cos you know, I can't think of anything more constructive. You know, what weak-minded people would say, i.e. some anonymous who said she's so scared of your flames, cloudy skies and Whatever Pebbles. And i said I won't stoop down to your level cos that's what losers always say to sound dignified and cool. I want to stress the point that you are pathetic cos I want to hurt you. My vocabulary is so limited and my mind is so narrow so these are the only things I could come up with. But I think my best shot is the you-dunno-what-youre-getting-into cos it's the lamest ever. I also said that your writing sucks cos you said mine sucks. and lastly, I'm so dumb!
POSTED BY: anonymous (cos i'm so afraid you'd throw in something hurtful!)
PS: Oh people please, just don't post your crap if you are just like me. And BYLT, why the fuck did you have to make me curious about Cloudy skies 86? I vomitted all over when I read her Deadly Love fic. Now I have to attend rehabilitation. Christ help me. It's horribly shocking. Shocking.
9:18 PM
I'm not CloudySkies...but you know who I am(i dodn't wanna create an account)...just wanna tell you that you have revealed me to new vocabularies-terms or words did not give a rat's ass before or even words that just did not sprang in my mind when I am wriring...keep up okay...i adore you.
1:49 AM
I'm not CloudySkies...but you know who I am(i didn't wanna create an account)...just wanna tell you that you have revealed me to new vocabularies-terms or words did not give a rat's ass before or even words that just did not sprang in my mind when I am wriring...keep up okay...i adore you.
sorry i mispelled a word in the previous comment...dun flame me for that kay?
1:55 AM
I'm not CloudySkies...but you know who I am(i didn't wanna create an account)...just wanna tell you that you have revealed me to new vocabularies-terms or words I did not give a rat's ass before or even words that just did not sprang in my mind when I am writing...keep up okay...i adore you.
sorry i mispelled words in the previous comments...dun flame me for that kay?
SHIT my keyboard sucks...
1:56 AM
Anonymous #3. Sorry, if I had an account I would use that instead, but since I do not, that name will have to do. Right, I agree, that is not really what it stands for.
You see my dear Magic Pebbles, MWP or what not, I have read the arguments between Bet You Love That and Cloudy Skies and have realized that she has brought this on herself.
If Bet You Love That finds her fic distasteful, as he obviously does, he has every right to say so. That is why they give the option to review, so that the reader has the ability to read the fic and tell the author what they think. If you can’t take the criticism, than don’t write a fic.
As for the whole argument, she brought that on herself. She should have listened to what Bet You Love That said and taken it. I also do not believe that a thank you would be too much to ask for. Retaliating, however, was a bit childish and uncalled for.
She is what 18? If she can not take criticism by now, than I will be more than happy to buy her a pacifier.
My apologizes Bet You Love That. Please do not be angry, but I had to say something.
Thank you for your time, God Bless.
12:06 PM
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